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Teen Poetry #5

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Dunphy
Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2002-05-03 01:17 PM

jesus died for our sin
but we keep doin'em awl ova agin.
he died wrigh awn tha cross
so that makes him tha big boss.
a lot of peeps had some tears
cause to jesus they did care.
we wunda why we keep doin sin
i think that some times we act stupit.
you know only he could tell
that we go ta heaven or down ta hell.

love dunphy
kevin jordan

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-05-03 10:38 PM

Kevin, he died for our sins, we only need to ask God for forgiveness and it is given. I like this, it's a good spin on it. And hello! aren't you a cutie!!

*hugs*

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