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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2002-05-03 10:01 AM


We pile into the car
I'm in the middle
and you're on my right
You reach for your seatbelt
but stop when you see
that I don't.
Ryan slams his foot on the gas
and we speed off around the corner
as you cling to the door
and my arm
as I cling to you
Ryan proclaims he's "just jokin"
and slows down
and when I look over,
you're still holding my arm.
We cross the intersection
and approach my house
Victoria and I get out,
and you hug me goodbye
before I walk into the house
and I can't help but think
of the time we spent hanging out
the two of us in that leather chair at Ally's
and truckin our way home.

© Copyright 2002 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
Acies
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Twilight Zone
1 posted 2002-05-07 09:46 AM


Allysa, now who is this person
Make up your mind girl, stay with one guy
Hope to hear the dirt on this j/k lol
email me or something

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


Acies
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2 posted 2002-05-09 10:30 AM


I think others should read this, it's a relaxing read
so......BUMP

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
3 posted 2002-05-10 09:45 AM


Acire, I only have one.
He's a sweetie....

Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2002-05-11 09:01 PM


Very real here.
I could feel it as I read it.
Nice job.

Jenn

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