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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2002-05-02 11:18 AM


Feelings bottled up within
Never showing on the outside
But late into the dark of the night
The tears streamed down
My eyes turning red
And cheeks going hot
My bright green eyes
On their way to bright blue

But that was then
Now my tears are joined
With my “described”
Bright & shiny smile
That grew brighter
When you slipped
Your ring on my finger
And I slipped my ring on yours

Tamma and David
December 8, 2001


Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants?

[This message has been edited by Tamma (05-02-2002 11:19 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-05-02 01:47 PM


Awww this is beautiful!!!!! LOVED it tamma!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Jesse Jaymz
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2 posted 2002-05-02 03:27 PM


great as always sis *hugs her tight* sharing a ring like that between a person means so much.  i wish i had that.  its so romantic knowing that you have your girlfriens ring on and she has yours.  *sigh*  great work hun
love ya sis
jesse

Another town another hotel room
Another dream that ended way too soon
Left me lonely way before the dawn
Searching for the strength to carry on

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