navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » NiCkEy
Teen Poetry #5
Post A Reply Post New Topic NiCkEy Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Dunphy
Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2002-05-01 01:26 PM


you know gurl you b so fine
tha gurl tha mine she make tha whole wurl shine.
she is fine like a diaman
wit her love i earned by tryan.
to me it felt like it wuzz hawd
but inside i left so good in my hawt.
you know i'm tha person that she does love
god gave me to her from up above.
she b sweet like a dove
awl thiss i learn to shove.
awl i can say iss i love you nickey
i'm glad that you b wit me.
you know that you on top of tha wurl
an i do love you gulr.

love dunphy

© Copyright 2002 Kevin Reid - All Rights Reserved
xShUgArHiGhx
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
1 posted 2002-05-02 01:57 PM


This was really sweet kev...you really expressed your feelings for her nicely!! I think you should give it to her Great job!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

songsoftheaftermath
Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84
a world of disarray
2 posted 2002-06-27 01:51 AM


cute ive gotta bite my tongue cuz you dont have a critic flag...so that's all i'll say *smiles sweetly*

could the darkness be my friend?

punkrockerrobin
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180
Sparks, NV
3 posted 2002-06-28 12:33 PM


uh huh i c well don't ever call me again or talk to me again!!!
robin

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » NiCkEy

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary