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fearing-laughter
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0 posted 2002-04-28 02:59 AM


hey everyone, what's shaking? for all you moderators out there...how come no one new can join? my friend tried to, but it wouldn't let him.

i see through your past
i can see what's inside
i see you
the person that i love
so please don't try to hide
because you are pure
and your soul shines
even from far away...
~this poem is dedicated to matt, who doesn't think he can write, even though some of these words are his own.  

-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

© Copyright 2002 bergundy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-29 11:23 AM


Thats sweet of you to dedicate this to your friend matt I liked it a lot!!!

Ohh and even thought pip's not accepting new members from all ova you can still e-mail ron with a username and stuff and request your friend be added in

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

fearing-laughter
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land of cheese (Wisconsin)
2 posted 2002-05-12 11:50 PM


-sugar
thanks for telling me about them accepting new poets, and the reason i dedicated this to my friend matt is that he told me some of the words and i got inspired to write it...just trying to prove that anyone can write poetry if they really try.  thanks for replying to this, i appreciate it.
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

twitchy
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since 2002-05-29
Posts 4

3 posted 2002-05-29 02:04 AM


dammit berg...*wipes eyes* how do you do this? i dont understand. thank you.

Sanity now and beyond me
I will always love you.
However long I stay
I will always love you.
Whatever words I say
I will always love you

Mon Cherie
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4 posted 2002-05-30 12:08 PM


Bergundy, this is sweet! Thank you for sharing it!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
Posts 104
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5 posted 2002-05-30 06:11 PM


I AGREE WIF EVERY 1 ELSE VEDDY TWEET N LOVING HEHE KEEP IT UP.PLZ CHECK OUT SUM OF MAH POEMS PLZ! IF U'D IKE OT GET IN TOUCH WIT ME MAH EMAIL IS inspiredpoetwriter@hotmail.com


-Ang-

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