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Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

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0 posted 2002-04-27 01:03 PM

Through the tears,
and though the haze-
I understand,
we need some space.

A beautiful heart-
beating only for mine.
And all this I know-
it's not the right time.

I'm not ready for love,
not ready for your graces.
Still wanting to see-
those unfamiliar places.

I've held you so close,
it was hard for me to see.
I was being so selfish-
and you need more than me.

I'll love you forever,
this always true.
If we're meant to be-
than I'll wait for you.

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2002-04-27 08:11 PM

Jenn, nicely done. This reminds me somewhat of a situation I've gone through. So, thus I can relate.

"I'm not ready for love,
not ready for your graces."

You spread out your feelings for us nicely.

Splendidly done.

I especially like the four line stanzas and the amount of stanzas. Good choices there.

Sincerely,
Titus

Every second that passes you are one second older. You'll never get that second back.

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2002-04-28 05:58 PM

~jenn
i sort of have mixed feelings about this poem...the beginning is sad and wistful, but i like the hope at the end. well done.
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

Jenn Cirrincione

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3 posted 2002-04-28 09:28 PM

This poem is written straight out of this corner of my heart. It's very very personal to me; most of my poetry is, but yeah... this is right there.

Thank you for reading.

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-04-29 11:18 AM

This was a great poem jenn. Its hard to not be selfish and make the decision to let someone go. You did a very strong thing...wonderful poem.

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

5 posted 2002-04-30 10:39 AM

Jenn - this was soo cool - exactly how i felt when "Justin Michael" broke up with me, last year...I still care about him...but back in Feb, when he tryed to get back with me, i had to tell him "no" sometimes its funny how things turn out...Good luck

~ Tamma

Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants?

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2002-06-06 10:21 AM

This is really sweet
hoping the best for you Jenn
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

7 posted 2002-06-09 01:05 PM

hey

its been awhile...but i really liked this. my bestfriend, (hes a guy obviously), and i have gone through this because we know now's not the time but its so complicated and confusing and dont you just hate how you cant figure things out? it drives me nuts. but neways, wonderful read, goin to my library

-=Kiley

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Shmurfkins
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since 2002-01-29

Posts 5
the state of confusion

8 posted 2002-06-10 11:01 PM

I like this Jenn. I haven't read anything from you in awhile...shoot, I haven't read poetry in awhile. it's a nice piece to come back to. I think I know who you're talking about in here, but...I'll keep my mouth closed.
btw, thanks for being there for me oh so many months ago. I really appreciate it

~Stace

WHOOOOOOOOOOO LIVES IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA? SPONGEBOB SQUAREPANTS!

Dopey Dope

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2002-06-10 11:12 PM

I understood this one very well. It hit home for me and i like poems that do that.
well done

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Jenn Cirrincione

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10 posted 2002-06-11 01:49 PM

I hate my life sometimes.

Thanks for everyone's replies.

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

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Twilight Zone

11 posted 2002-06-12 09:43 AM

Don't we all?

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

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