Teen Poetry #5 |
When love fades away |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I never really asked for this, so why is it here? All those things I never noticed, now seem so dear. I love someone so much, but does it really matter? If the feelings aren't mutual, the relationship will shatter. I can't seem to think straight, 'cuz there's so much on my mind. All the answers seem out of reach, and there's none I can find. I feel so lost and confused, I don't know what to do. It hurts being near, but I keep running back to you.... You feed my desires, and you heal my pain. But also you cause heartbreak, but beside you I still remain... I'll never understand, just how you do it. You say you care about me, but I know your heart is a bottomless pit. You never once told me how you felt, but still I stayed. But slowly, ever so slowly, the love began to fade...... Pain = Love ~if you want me to fall for you, you gotta give me something worth tripping over~ |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
WoW!! Dis was weally good!!!!!! hehehe I wonder who..dis is bout?? TELL ME!!! lol good write!! all mi love ~Jess ~*~Never take anything for granted~*~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Pain does indeed equal love more times than less. I know how you feel...wonderful job on this poem. Thanks for sharing this with us! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
My gosh... this was the exact perfect description of me and someone else two years ago... very scary... it brought back some memories I'd rather forget but would do well to remember... Thank you. Kielo |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
WOW! I was in a bad mood and didnt feel like responding to posts... BUT THIS WAS JUST TOO GOOD! An excellent description of a feeling that is usually really hard to ecplain I loved it! I really did love it! ~Lisa |
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