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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2002-04-21 03:29 PM


It's dark on the dance floor.
The sparkling lights glow off your face.
You wrap your arms around me
as the next song starts
and we drift into oblivion.

You lie your head on my shoulder,
I rest my head on yours
we rock back and forth to the music
as one person
instead of two.

With each step
I'm melting into you
I'm lost in time
as you hold me closer
as I melt into you.

(There will probably be more..)

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
1 posted 2002-04-22 11:35 AM


Aww how cute!!! sounds so amazing

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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2 posted 2002-04-22 06:18 PM


Very cool. The ending is great. Talk to you later. Sorry I didn't email you, I can't get online on the weekends.

Kielo

I LOVE YOU! *kisses you* hehehe...

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
3 posted 2002-04-22 07:16 PM


Thanks, and Kielo, it's no problem...
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4 posted 2002-04-24 12:42 PM


Very sweet.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

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5 posted 2002-06-06 10:18 AM


Just hoping all these poems are for the same guy   lol j/k

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

[This message has been edited by acire (06-06-2002 10:19 AM).]

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6 posted 2002-06-07 10:34 AM


Oooh... this is so sweet! Sounds almost like a fairy tale! Hopefully it's a cinderalla story

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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