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All I Know

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~*brittt*~
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East Haddam, CT


0 posted 04-19-2002 06:15 PM       View Profile for ~*brittt*~   Email ~*brittt*~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~*brittt*~

Hey guys, I haven't posted in so-o long!! I wrote this opem a little while ago but I liked it and I thought I would share it with you and see what you think, so lemme know!

           *All I Know*

Secrets, lies, deception
The cycle never ends
It hurts to know that all of them,
Pretended to be my friends.

Circles of conspiracy
Betrayal, it all hurts
But to have trusted them and been let down,
That feeling is the worst.

Lyings all they do
Because everyones so fake
And so I begin to wonder,
How much more can I take?

Cryings become instinctive
Always feeling so alone,
But I can't bring myself to change it,
Cuz it's all I've evr known.
© Copyright 2002 Brittney - All Rights Reserved
Demonic Illusion
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since 02-07-2002
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1 posted 04-19-2002 07:59 PM       View Profile for Demonic Illusion   Email Demonic Illusion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Demonic Illusion

hey that was good ;o)

Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness

AliveAgain
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since 01-07-2002
Posts 9
In the clouds


2 posted 04-19-2002 08:15 PM       View Profile for AliveAgain   Email AliveAgain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AliveAgain

this poem was so good and i think there are a lot of people that can relate to that. hang in there. keep writing.
dastard
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since 07-14-2001
Posts 369
in tearing silence


3 posted 04-20-2002 02:50 AM       View Profile for dastard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dastard

.. I really can relate..

"Pain doesn't hurt when it's all you've ever felt" ~Marie, the girl of a thousand truths           

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs


4 posted 04-22-2002 11:37 AM       View Profile for xShUgArHiGhx   Email xShUgArHiGhx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit xShUgArHiGhx's Home Page   View IP for xShUgArHiGhx

This is something like i would have written last year when i hated all my so called friends...one day you'll find true people who are your TRUE friends..not ones that will hurt you...you deserve the best and i hope you get that ::hugs::

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

corey14
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since 05-23-2001
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Boston, Mass, U.S.A.


5 posted 02-26-2003 10:45 PM       View Profile for corey14   Email corey14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for corey14

its all good we all have been there  cheer up have a new out lookout on everything  I'll be your friend =)

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

i have one but i cant think of it

Barbara
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6 posted 03-09-2003 08:30 AM       View Profile for Barbara   Email Barbara   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Barbara

really nice poem..
MeGaN_LoVeS_DaViD
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7 posted 03-19-2003 11:39 AM       View Profile for MeGaN_LoVeS_DaViD   Email MeGaN_LoVeS_DaViD   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for MeGaN_LoVeS_DaViD

I really liked your poem I can relate to it very much. You took the words right out of my mouth! Keep up the good work and never give up! You're a great writer!

 
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