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never_a_princess
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0 posted 2002-04-18 10:08 PM


The tragedy of Verona,
'Star-crossed lovers' take their lives.

The sadness of Colorado,
A believer dies for Him.

The dejection of New York,
Innocence meets death.

The melancholia of this world,
And whatever happened to happily ever after?

Friends r angels who lift u 2 ur feet when ur wings have trouble remembering how 2 fly.
Stumbling blox can b stepping stones if u allow them 2 b.

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1 posted 2002-04-19 11:22 AM


I dont know what happened to happily ever after either hun...im shur its out there somewhere tho..great write

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

anonymousfemale
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2 posted 2002-04-20 02:32 AM


Happily ever after doesn't exist. That was more of an ending for Alice in Wonderland after her trip on drugs.

Good write though. If you find happily ever after in your own little way, congratulations.

~AF~

I tried to stab my shadow the other day. It's a shame my leg got in the way.

CwboyAtHeart
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3 posted 2002-04-20 11:19 PM


Yeah, I too wish "happily ever after" was easier to find...  Too fairytale-ish for the real world, though, I guess.  I liked the poem, though, and if you ever find that 'happily ever after' that supposedly exists, be sure to let me know.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

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