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Your Beauty |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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Howdy. This one is one that I wrote recently, it's not written from personal experience. The idea was suggested on the discussion board as something to help me try to get over my writers block, so I gave it a try. Let me know what you think. Your Beauty Your beauty shines brighter than the rising sun And is more constant than the crashing waves Your soul more free than a soaring eagle Flying through an open sky showing all of its grace Your eyes more blue than the deep oceans Your arms more comforting than the mother’s womb To the rest of the world you just can’t compare None else in God’s creation is as beautiful as you - Cody - |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Sounds great too me!  "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww cody this is beautiful Really sweet!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cody- This is absolutely gorgeous! You have quite a way with words, and I'm really enjoying your poetry. Keep it up! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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