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Demonic Illusion
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since 2002-02-07

Posts 50

0 posted 2002-04-15 12:12 PM

Been through Hell and back,
Still something I lack.
I don't even know who I am,
But you still call me Superman.
I think I'm caving in,
Living with immortal sin.
Collapse from the pain,
And still you call me Superman.
Through my own body I carve,
My own hunger makes me starve.
No longer wanting to reamin,
Yet you still call me Superman.
One thing I know why,
Doesn't matter how hard I try.
I had to fall to lose it all,
But you STILL call me Superman.
thanks for everything, for always be there for me...hope ya know this Superman things eventually gonna convince me i really am Superman =oÞ

Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-04-16 02:03 PM

So your superman huh?? I liked the flow of this poem and the meaning behind it. Good job

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Demonic Illusion
Member

since 2002-02-07

Posts 50

2 posted 2002-04-16 04:32 PM

naw i dont think i am, my friend believes i am totally convinced and i did nothing to make her think i am....just how she sees me...one of those things with a long story behind it

Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-04-16 06:30 PM

ahhh i understand

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2002-04-17 02:42 AM

great way of writing a poem, from somebody's view on yourself... wow, didn't even know you could do that!

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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