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Dunphy
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since 2002-03-14
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Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2002-04-11 01:44 PM


dawgs be ware off the chains
i don't know if you can maintaine.
juss look at my puppy face
you know somthin i come from a diffrent place.
you know i juss got loose
i'm full wit rhymes like mutha goose.
i muss be a god
you know i'm livin lawge.
you know i got tha cahs
every time i come ouot people awr tawkin like trash.
why i dunno
you know it's time ta go.
bow wow wow yippy yo yippy yeah whear my dawgs at bawk wit me now.
you know now time to come down
city city town ta town.
i dunno if i'm gonaa go unda groun.
every time i write rhyme people thinks its a crime
i don't know why they think its a lie.
iss awl confusin
awl ammusin.
why do people got to be abusein?
you know i'm full wit love
it came frum up above.
awl thiss stuff i got ta shove.
you know now iss time ta say peace
you know awl my to realeace.

dunphy

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1 posted 2002-04-13 03:54 PM


cute! but i'm kinda confused bout it oh well i liked it anyways. love ya!
robin

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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2 posted 2002-04-13 08:50 PM


sometimes, you gotta get out and run
really liked the flow here Kevin, your poetry is so tight.

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3 posted 2002-04-14 11:01 PM


OOOO i liked this one as well kevin!! As always good job Keep em comin!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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4 posted 2002-05-02 09:00 AM



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