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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2002-04-10 08:11 AM


Go ahead.
Tell me I confuse you.
And you never know what I want.
Just go ahead...

Tell me that my eyes say one thing-
while my lips are moving backwards.
And I hear you say, "You're words are like volcanos, but your heart turns to ice."

And I cannot seem-
to make you understand.
The ideas that float,
just below what's visible.

How can anyone
understand?
When I, myself-
remain in constant
uncertainty.

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1 posted 2002-04-10 10:44 AM


i really liked that. i haven't been on in a while and it's good to have the first poem i read be a really good one.
thanks 4 posting. you did good.

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2 posted 2002-04-10 11:44 AM


Confusion was definately an awesome title because it describes it all so well. COnfusion sux thats for shur, hope things start to become a little more clear for you guys I enjoyed the read jenn

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