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Promise Poem (im back everyone)

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Ender
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since 12-08-1999
Posts 246
Yuma, AZ USA


0 posted 04-08-2002 07:20 PM       View Profile for Ender   Email Ender   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Ender's Home Page   View IP for Ender

So much, you mean to me
Wish, only you to see
Lost, I would be
Without you, for me to see

Dependent, in a way
How, oh so hard to say
Your friendship, so great it is
Your love, so much the better

Darkness, I used to see
All around, happiness
In the air, love
All except for me

Into my life, you come
Magically, a gift, or a sign from God
Open my eyes you did
Happiness and love, you did show me

Nine months ago
Almost to the day
We can make it more
Just think what we could say

As long as we can
And be happy
We might as well
Make it so

We both know there are problems
Close, I think they make us
Work them out, we always have
Changing for the better

Change, we both must
But for the better
So, here I write
To you, a letter in poem

Change, I will
To do, maybe the last thing
Worth it, it is
For your love, to keep

I say this for you
But mainly for me
For I know, change I must
In order to be truly happy

You have opened my eyes
Shown me the world
Oh so differently
Better than before

Corny as this may be
It is from the heart
I love you so much
More than you can touch

Promise to you, I do
To change
To help
To make things better

Down here, I put my heart
On the table, I spill my guts
My love for you
Is so much

Scary, it is
Serious, it can be
But, honestly
I donít think we arenít meant to be

Maybe not forever,
But not this short
I need you to help me
Get through this part of my life

No matter how much I promise
Or what I tell
I can only show you
The ways I am changing

You will be happy to hear
My voice tonight
Filled with comfort and happiness
It shall be

I cannot explain it
Please donít ask
My eyes were opened
By the greater being

Faith, I do need
Faith, I shall have
Once again
My life shall not be as it was

I am changing
For I need to
But I need some help
From the one I love

Now I must end this poem
For my feelings are indescribable beyond now
But in my heart
It will continue forever

My love for you will be forever
Never to end or decrease
In my heart you will always be
But, I hope you will be more

I am sorry for the stress I have caused
The problems I have made true
Please forgive me
Even if itís the last thing I hear

*its been so long since i posted here---i cant remember the last time i did ----but i knew i had to post this one---*

If I could be anything in the world, I would want to be your tear.  I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheek, and die on your lips.  -Ender

© Copyright 2002 Richard Melick - All Rights Reserved
Ender
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since 12-08-1999
Posts 246
Yuma, AZ USA


1 posted 04-09-2002 07:57 PM       View Profile for Ender   Email Ender   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ender's Home Page   View IP for Ender

ouch guys...whatever happend to responding to these posts?     

If I could be anything in the world, I would want to be your tear.  I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheek, and die on your lips.  -Ender

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2 posted 04-09-2002 09:54 PM       View Profile for xShUgArHiGhx   Email xShUgArHiGhx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit xShUgArHiGhx's Home Page   View IP for xShUgArHiGhx

YAY UR BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Welcome back buddie nice to see ya here again!! You definately came back with a strong poem Hope you had a nice little break...i look forward to reading ur stuff more often around here

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Ender
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since 12-08-1999
Posts 246
Yuma, AZ USA


3 posted 04-10-2002 09:46 PM       View Profile for Ender   Email Ender   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ender's Home Page   View IP for Ender

sup sugar high------man, i remember back in the day when u had like less posts than me...uve been busy...lol......

thanx....my girlfriend loved it

If I could be anything in the world, I would want to be your tear.  I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheek, and die on your lips.  -Ender

teenpoet
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since 10-17-2001
Posts 287
Michigan


4 posted 04-17-2003 11:22 AM       View Profile for teenpoet   Email teenpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teenpoet

It's a very good heartfelt poem, if only I could write so well!
~Keep dreaming~
kirhar
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since 04-29-2003
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5 posted 04-29-2003 09:06 PM       View Profile for kirhar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kirhar

nice poem...theres this guy i like and i can kinda relate to the feelings in this poem...

[This message has been edited by kirhar (04-29-2003 09:10 PM).]

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