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Teen Poetry #5

Perception

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2002-04-07 05:58 AM

K, da writers block is gone, and I'm on a roll! It's 3:00am and I just wrote this poem and another, so I'm gunna post them. lol here ya go This one isn't very good.

PERCEPTION

An hour isn't long
During a 24 hour day
A mile isn't far
On a 100 mile drive

Everything that's small
Is part of something big
Whoever is alone
Is part of a team

Whether you feel small
Or if you feel big
You always are important
To make the world whole

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-04-07 10:30 AM

that is really a wonderful message

I liked this very much.

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-04-07 07:38 PM

wow...I never thought of it that way...

its kinda cool to look at it like that...comforting..and I dont even know why

Anyway, Ill stop my rambling...GREAT JOB

~Lisa

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

3 posted 2002-04-08 01:11 AM

Go cody. That makes me feel warm and tingly inside *grins* lol. that was a goodjob and i knew you would get over writers block... eventually. lol. great post

*Erica*

Jenn Cirrincione