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Teen Poetry #5

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fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2002-04-07 01:13 AM

aye this is a strange one...lol

you are so full of hate
and your eyes leak pain
it is no wonder that
no one can survive your kiss
fire spews from your twisted mouth
and i become engulfed in it's flame
rage screams forth from your lungs
while i stand alone
burning, bleeding
reveling in this pain

-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

[This message has been edited by fearing-laughter (04-07-2002 01:26 AM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-04-07 10:32 AM

wow, very cool write...I like the imagery!

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-04-07 07:35 PM

oooo dark and twisted...

I love I love!

Great write, I liked what it said...and how it said it!

~Lisa

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

3 posted 2002-04-08 07:20 PM

Ooooh... I love it. It actually reminds me of myself (the person you're describing). lol Yes, damned is the man who falls in love with me. Anywho, as I said before, I loved it. Dark, twisted, honest, raw... my favorite kind of poem.

DE

"I never claimed to be your savior
I said I had a dirty mouth
Stop analyzing my behavior
If you’re too dumb to work it out"
Garbage

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