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betrayed... again
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betrayed... again |
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nikki813 Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 15PA, USA |
Red hot flames burn my heart I feel as though I've fallen apart You torched my soul You burnt my life My future has changed I'll no longer be your wife You've [edited by Moderator] with my head For the last time You've [edited by Moderator] with my heart but yet I'll be fine We were supposed to have Kids, a house, and a life but what I feel now is like the stab of a knife it was you who hurt me but it is you who will lose there is noone else like me but yet this you did choose you [edited by Moderator] yourself over won't let you drag me down I'm numb inside now my heart has been bound I'll keep it to myself too scared to give it away but you won't hurt me forever I'll forget about you one day. [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (04-06-2002 10:13 AM).] |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
ooo I liked this, you show him! Very good...sorry about your "loss," but in the end it will be your gain... Great Write ~Lisa |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Raw emotion!!! Strong and powerful words!! ::hugs:: You did a great job expressing your feelings!! Awesome poem  iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I know how it feels, when you had a life planned ahead of you...and it all screws up...Thats what happend between me and my guy..I wrote one like this once..It was the other persons loss..not yours..YOU can find better...YOU will find better..I wish someone would tell me those words! *Lisa Ann* |
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