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Wishing it were meant to be... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Like a gem blue and sparkly So new to me this feeling I have You and I forbidden and unlawful In response to those rules- my heart aches to be blind and I cannot see anyone but you Even though I shouldn't. And when I told myself there is nothing between us Like the song says- this is what I really meant to say... Kiss me. |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
you know love is a strange thing. you never know what is going to happen in life. take one step at a time and open your heart and listen it will give yo uthe write answer. take my advice it will work. i like your wok keep'em commin. love kevin reid aka dunphy |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
amazing write jenn...great as usual!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Arggggg... Sometimes life just sucks. Thanks for your replies guys...this is just some whimsical feeling I got, and I really really shouldn't have..in that "off limits" kind of way.  I must be strong...hehe thanks again guys Jenn "I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about." |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 Love it. Love it. Love it. Enjoyed the italics on the follow up lines, and the ending.... "this is what I really meant to say... Kiss me." Pukka. Simple pukka.  ~ Titus "Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter" |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is well, for seriously a lack of a better word, FANTASTIC! and I have to keep this one, I love it!! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ahh Jenn. You're right. If it is meant to be it will be but try and do the convincing thing first, mmkay? Lots of emotion, and your expression is always a nice thing to read. OH! And you brought gems into it! YAY! Gems rock.  I enjoyed the read as I always do so keep writing and if you need to talk, you know where to find me. ~AF~ "Sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a little crazy." - Susanna Kaysen |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Jenn This is totally different from the other poems you've written This is just plain impressive I love the style used to write it You're on the right track, keep it up thanks for the read là où est mon amour? |
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