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Teen Poetry #5

Seasons

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2002-04-02 12:59 PM

Winter to spring,
a light airy breeze.

Warm sunny skys,
replaces deary dark days.

Hot Chocolate no more,
lemonade glore.

From Santa and the North Pole,
to the Easter Bunny and a rabbit hole.

Winter to spring,
the transition has come along.

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

1 posted 2002-04-02 05:11 PM

I liked the ideas, but I found the rhyme distracting, because some of it rhymed, and some of it didn't. I had to reread parts of it because I was listening for a rhyme that wasn't there. Other than that, very cool. Seasons are awesome things...

Kielo

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-04-02 08:38 PM

oo I wish I had a spring...although I wish I had had a winter...and a summer and a fall...

This makes no sense to people that arent from my part of New England

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-04-03 01:14 AM

Well said and thank god for the transition!! Im smellin the flowers and the lawn mowers are starting 2 wake me up in the morning...its finally here!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

4 posted 2002-04-04 01:14 PM

I love spring and the daffodils..hrm did I spell the right? *shrugs* who cares anyways, cute and sweet just like the breeze the whispers through the trees

Kristen

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