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katherine
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0 posted 2002-03-31 06:30 AM


nothing deep nothing meaningful jsut something.

why so down......
Why so down on the thing that gets your blood pumping.
Helps you up when you're down
Tells you not to cry,
yet wipes away your tears when you do.

The one who knows all the secrets
and tells you you're cute.
Looks after you when you're sick,
lets you drink all their coke.
Gives the best hugs in the world.

Always thinking,
careing,
holding,
shareing.

The one whos there when the "girz" are to stressed or busy.
The one who worries when you're down.
Who knows the stories.
Who gives the best advice.

Girls why so down on the boys?
Sure you have the ones who hurt,
who lie
who cheat.
.
.
but what about the friends
the very best friend a girl could have
who does all the other stuff.
.
.
.
.
Yet still
puts up with
you,
crap and all.

© Copyright 2002 Katie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-31 01:01 PM


oh i like that very well done!! *applauds*

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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2 posted 2002-04-03 01:44 AM


Hmm very good point!! Interesting read katherine!! Good poem

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

vlraynes
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3 posted 2002-04-18 03:56 AM



katherine-
This is a very thought-provoking piece.
Some good questions in this.
Well done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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