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Kevin
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0 posted 2002-03-29 01:16 AM


I wish that my life were out of some teen movie
Where angels walk by in little red dresses
Where no lack of courage could hope to subdue me
And chocolate brown eyes put an end to my stresses
The plot still would thicken, a wrong move or two
Yet as in the end I would have my true love
But movies are made to be watched just like you
And I am but what the audience is of

[This message has been edited by Kevin (03-29-2002 01:40 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-29 04:26 AM


great write kevin. nice emmotion.
robin

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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2 posted 2002-03-29 03:52 PM


That would be absolutely amazing!! If only...im constantly saying that! Too bad it cant be that way. Awesome write hun..hope to see you write more!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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3 posted 2002-03-31 06:41 AM


i think everyone wants that, too bad it's not the way it works but nice idea.
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