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Kosetsu
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0 posted 2002-03-28 10:00 PM



Fingers trace along ice cold flesh,
Caressing, soothing, cutting, bleeding
Onto the rainbow colored insanity
Of the carpet and it’s fringe,

Biting hands pull at tortured hair,
Screaming, tearing, quietly weeping
Out tears of vulnerable blood
Onto the rainbow colored insanity
Of the carpet and it’s fringe,

Fingernails cut along pale white thighs
Swaying to the music and screaming out of key
Swirling through a psychotic world
Of this rainbow colored insanity.


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Definitely not one of my usual pieces..or maybe it is..dunno....took like 2 seconds for this to pop into my head and to type it out. Inspirational credit goes to a picture by Sarah J. Collver titled "Stitched Chrystalis" and from a groovy part of one of Default's songs where the guy sounds really emotional.

-Adam

"If life is so significant, then why do we die?"

[This message has been edited by Kosetsu (03-28-2002 10:01 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-28 10:40 PM


Adam, this is AWESOME!!!!!! I'm glad your muse decided to show up for a bit again! Moo!
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2 posted 2002-03-28 10:42 PM


Wow, adam, once again I am astounded, and touched by your poetry...

Another great write

~Lisa

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3 posted 2002-03-28 10:47 PM


http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/loth/c/o/collver/collver.html

That's the art gallery that inspired it. I love this girl's art...particularly the ones featuring Nurisa and the Stitched Chrystalis band.

-Adam

"If life is so significant, then why do we die?"

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4 posted 2002-03-29 03:53 PM


I really liked this a lot..hey if your gonna experience insanity it might as well be rainbow colored right?? Nicely done

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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5 posted 2002-03-29 08:45 PM


Woah---dude...I've always had a thing for...I don't know what to call it! But you deliver it!!!

Let's just call it my favourite-nameless pizza! Dude...you're awesome!!! ^_^

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

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6 posted 2002-04-04 10:41 PM


that art work is awesome...wow and awesome write!

A life without love…is no life at all.

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