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I am free
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I am free |
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laconic Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 64Melbourne, Australia |
undefined lines tracing my mind leaving behind the wasted time of my life, inprinted forever my soul stuck in one place as if my body was severed this is the date, that i faced my fate going against my destiny, will i be ok? only time will tell, how things reveal all the mysters of life i still need to deal but for now i'm free, to be who i be no conformity in mind, I AM ME! standing on my own two feet, i am complete even in the darkest cells they can't enchain me my freedom has been paid for in blood i am free...... |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Wow, this was excellent. The emotion was well-expressed. Very cool. Kielo |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
this was very good and I am glad you finally found your freedom... Very few ever find it... ~Lisa |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
awesome poem!! liked it a lot  thanks for sharing!iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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