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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-03-25 05:08 PM

Cryptic emotions
Strung together
Flirt amongst the verbs
And adjectives
My pen conjures
Upon this fragile piece of paper
To the naked eye
It appears to be a mere letter
But to psychic intitution
It's an invitation
To let go
And allow your senses to make love
To the flickering candle
Deep within your soul
Go ahead
Close your eyes
I promise no harm
Will ever come your way
Lay back
Relax and allow my words
To caress your lips
And creep deep with the
Cracks of your heart
Don't worry
I'm not asking for anything in return
Just promise me
Once you find yourself dangeroulsy close
To the edge
Just grab onto my hand
And never lose faith
For I'm always going to be there
Standing at the bottom
To catch you
If you were to ever
Crash and Burn

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (03-25-2002 05:14 PM).]

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-03-25 07:40 PM

Wow Kris, this is one of my favorites....its not just what you said, but the way you said it...Excellent...

Now, get on MSN ok, I miss you!!!!!!

~Lisa

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2002-03-25 10:26 PM

This is really neat.
Thanks for posting!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

3 posted 2002-03-25 11:13 PM

"It appears to be a mere letter
But to psychic intitution
It's an invitation
To let go"

I really like this poem . . . Just the way it's written and expressed is great!