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Dunphy
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since 2002-03-14
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Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2002-03-25 10:01 AM


changez we go through every day
some times we gotta watch what we say
no matta what happins
for tha good we can't be laughin
then it will show
then it will blow
that ain't a good tihng
i'm gonna give you a diman ring
juss let me tihnk
juss for a min
i know i did more then one sin
but that's for every day life
i odn't think that i'll eva have awife
juss becawz of awl tha bad
in side my soul i feel sad
i dunno why
some times that i do wanna cry
it's normal i guess
i'm from the east an noawt tha west
i'm gonna tell you sumthin wutt i nee most
youk now why cawz i'm frum tha east coast
when i write a rhyme people think it's a crime
i dunno why though
i juss like to make tha beat flow
now it's time for tha en
wit my crew time to spen
when i go please don't cry
cawz some day we awl will reunite


                     frum Dunphy
                    kevin reid
                    18 m mass

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1 posted 2002-03-25 01:55 PM


Nice poem
keep typing your doing a great job!¥!

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2 posted 2002-03-25 04:01 PM


You remind me of someone...
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3 posted 2002-03-25 10:14 PM


you have an intresting style i love it!

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2002-03-26 02:08 PM


seems like ur havin a hard time with your emotions..hope you figure things out!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Dunphy
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since 2002-03-14
Posts 82
Massachusetts USA
5 posted 2002-03-27 09:50 AM


you know sometimes i don't know how to figure things out becawz i wonda if i have a brain or nawt. why am i even on this sicknin planet. iss like bein in hell. i wish i could change my life but iss hawd you know every time i try it fails. why me why me!!! i don't know ne more please help me god or some one willin to give their spare time to help me. i would appretiate it.

thank you peeps for replyin to me. love ya'll laddies out their. holla back at me when eva you want. you know my email address.

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