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My revelation |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
I’ve come to the realization That I can only be me And with much work and dedication I can finally be free If I work to my destination Then the labor will be worth it Concentrate on my education Never let myself forfeit Overlook my desperation rely on intelligence Always look for explanation Never misrepresent Do not lose to hesitation grab the moment when its here Be the talk of conversation Don’t be shy, don’t hide from fear Look to friends for inspiration Love yourself and them Remember the art of relaxation Never be quick to condemn I’ve come to the realization That I can only be me And with much work and dedication I can finally be free To everything there is a season... |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
Very insperational. I enjoyed this a lot. It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh Lisa! I love what you did with this! I love the way you ended it!! See? I told you it wasn't bad! Hun I'm putting it in my library! Hopelessly in love |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I agree this was a very inspirational piece!! LIked it a lot lisa!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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laconic Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 64Melbourne, Australia |
I’ve come to the realization That your poetry is magic And with much work and dedication you'll exceed all limits and go beyond fantastic. good work....i liked it alot  |
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