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Broken Wish |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
Life standing still Time doesn’t wait Little by little My soul escapes Another hope To join the stars Wishing still… And forever… To see his precious face. |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
umm..just to let you all know...this reads better if you listen to "linkin park - my december" at the same time. the cause for writing this? to make a long story short...i havent seen my bf in 2 years and this summer he was gonna come over here for a couple of weeks to visit but as it turns out he cant or might not be able to because of certain reasons...so yeah A life without love…is no life at all. |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
i must say i do like this piece. probably because i prefer shorter pieces [they have more of an impact]. also, i feel no poem needs an explanation. just a few words of wisdom from the desk of jen. cudos to you. good work. /back to jen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"To see his precious face" If I had my way we'd all boycott love, but seeing as how that's not likely to happen, at least we can get some excellent poems like this out of it, right? Right. Thanks for the read, I can't wait for more! Hopelessly in love |
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