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Cinderelly
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0 posted 2002-03-24 12:45 PM


Change is bad thing?
Get a clue . . .

Still the same,
carbon copies of the past.

Never get beyond this game,
of cat and mouse.

Future unknown,
left to possibilities.

Yet we've been down this road,
once again resulting in a dead end.

For nothing changes
between me and you.



© Copyright 2002 Jamie - All Rights Reserved
LCBS
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1 posted 2002-03-24 12:59 PM


This was very good, sometimes change is warmly welcome, sometimes change is despised....it depends on the situation...

Keep an open mind though

~Lisa

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2 posted 2002-03-24 02:41 AM


"For nothing changes between me and you"

Very powerful words here. You'd think that we, as humans, would be able to let situations like this go, and move on with our lives, right? *sigh* Good write here. Thanks for the read!

Hopelessly in love

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3 posted 2002-03-26 02:24 PM


Isnt it amazing how you find yourself on a constant merry-go-round in life? i just cant stand that..well said and well written!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

keoni
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4 posted 2002-03-27 01:08 PM


Reminds me of that saying The more things change the more they  stay the same, or gety worse in my case. I liked the poem, nice job
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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