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LCBS
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0 posted 2002-03-23 11:53 PM



For years I tried to be someone else
I just could never comprehend
That people could like me for me
That I need not pretend
But everyone has to like me, right?
Or else I could not be whole
And I changed and morphed my mind
While hating my body, and killing my soul
I did some things that one might regret
Just to gain their admiration
And found myself in a world of guises
Lost myself in this generation
Then in a fit of rage and hurt
I stumbled to this website
And found a community of brotherhood
Where I could be me, & freely write
My feelings poured out on its pages
Letting my heart out of its enclosure
And now I found a plethora of friends
And at the same time, found composure
So thank you all my pip companions
You have made me who I am
And to all you "friends" of the past
thanks for not giving a damn
Hey guys, thank you for appreciating me for who I truly am, you know who you are....


You Guys are my life!
~Lisa

To everything there is a season...

© Copyright 2002 Lisa Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-24 02:39 AM


*tackles Lisa* Too great Lisa, too great! You are totally appreciated here!

Hopelessly in love

vlraynes
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2 posted 2002-04-05 12:16 PM



Lisa-
YES!!!!!  I love it!
I'm sure there are many others who can relate
to these feelings.
Extremely well done!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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3 posted 2002-04-05 02:50 AM


Pukka

~ Titus

"Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter"

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4 posted 2002-05-02 09:16 AM


It's nice to see how members of pip have evolved to be great friends

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
5 posted 2002-05-02 01:56 PM


Aww lisa this was such a great post!! Your a beautiful and amazing person just the way you are and i hope you never ever try and change urself ever again!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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