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anonymous albert ?
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0 posted 03-23-2002 07:05 PM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for anonymous albert ?

Breathing not,
For me.
Why am I...
The way I am?
Promised with
Only love.
My heart hurts,
As I despair. Trying
To believe,
In something else...
But I am
Pathetic to write
About the things;
Thats Fading...

Goodbye.


"Dont piss me off, Im runing out of places to hide the bodies."

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (03-23-2002 07:39 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 ALBY - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 03-23-2002 08:14 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

You've captured some very intense and sad feelings in this piece Albert ... I hope your are OK? Please check your mail ...

Best wishes and hugs
/Kit
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2 posted 03-23-2002 10:44 PM       View Profile for LCBS   Email LCBS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LCBS

This was very good...but are you ok?  What do you mean last peice for passions?

Great write, email me if you need to....\

~Lisa
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3 posted 03-24-2002 02:05 AM       View Profile for quietlydying   Email quietlydying   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for quietlydying

wow.

i'm speechless.

[that's a good thing].

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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4 posted 03-24-2002 02:54 AM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Hey you better not be leaving, you! Come back and write more poems for me to read!!! *sniff*

Hopelessly in love

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5 posted 03-24-2002 12:37 PM       View Profile for keoni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for keoni

This was good, very sad. You don't wanna go out on a negative note do you? At least it's the dramatic way to go...
Jon

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"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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6 posted 03-24-2002 06:38 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us, I really enjoyed the read. I am hoping that this won't be the last we see of your work and that you will stay at passions or if you can't I hope that you can keep in touch some way

Hope to see you around some time mate

Andrew: Huggle Administraitor

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7 posted 03-25-2002 04:47 AM       View Profile for katherine   Email katherine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for katherine

hey this is sad are you ok?
if you want to talk i'm here(thats only if you want to talk to me really i don't bite)
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8 posted 03-25-2002 04:14 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

You seem to know how I feel...
Ina
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9 posted 03-25-2002 07:14 PM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

Hey there...its been a while....
well i enjoyed the poem.
good luck.

regina
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10 posted 03-26-2002 02:14 PM       View Profile for xShUgArHiGhx   Email xShUgArHiGhx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit xShUgArHiGhx's Home Page   View IP for xShUgArHiGhx

I hope your not saying what u think im saying...please dont be goin off and leavin on me now!!! Im gonna miss you way to much!! This was an amazing piece...great job!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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11 posted 03-26-2002 06:38 PM       View Profile for chasing rain   Email chasing rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chasing rain

Alby-

Well, Despair, I shall see you later. As for now, you, as well as your work and replies will be missed. More than missed. Your absence shall be felt, my friend.

And of the poem? The sadness and depression that lurks behind your eyes makes me wonder if there is more to this poem than you are letting on. Good luck, Alby. *hugs*

*wails and bigger hugs* You're coming next.

-Leah

"...and sometimes when the music whispers quiet in your ears
take some time to dream a dream and put aside your fears..."

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12 posted 03-27-2002 01:43 PM       View Profile for Starr   Email Starr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starr

This is good.. You seem lost a bit.. Talk about it, it helps..
Very nice writing.. hope you're staying... and not leaving  I only just came back ... and to see you leave now?!?! ...

Misty

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

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13 posted 05-14-2003 11:13 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

*sighs* I miss you and your writing. The emails haven't been getting through so I hope you're ok. Your poetry always brought out such intense emotions in me.  

Be safe, my friend.

~AF~

I'm not being rude. You're just insignificant.

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14 posted 05-14-2003 02:49 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

I think it's kind of neat.  He left precisely a year after he came.  Too bad Feb 23 this year didn't see his return...

Oh well... just another forgotten name, I guess.

Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.

~Percy Bysshe Shelley

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15 posted 05-24-2003 12:48 PM       View Profile for Barbara   Email Barbara   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Barbara

THATS JUST THE WAY I FEEL JUST RIGHT NOW!
Thank you for this poem!

Barbara
 
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