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peachesNcream
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Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2002-03-23 04:00 PM


Hey everyone...Right now I'm going through a hard time with my family and some other things so I started writing again..So just leave me some comments on how I did...


Watching the pengulum swing,
While my faith is slowly dying,
Knowing I've done it again,
I can't help myself,
I'm not trusted anymore,
There's no reason not to be,
No one seems to understand,
Confusion and frustation has taken over,
Nothing will be the same,
Only because I got caught again..

~*~Never take anything for granted~*~

© Copyright 2002 Jessica Dodson - All Rights Reserved
LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
1 posted 2002-03-23 04:35 PM


I know this feeling all to well....you did a great job of expressing it...

Great Write

~Lisa

quietlydying
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the wonderful land of oz
2 posted 2002-03-24 01:57 AM


what a time in my life for you to write this.

i can so relate.

ouch.

it hit deep.

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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Riding
3 posted 2002-03-24 02:48 AM


Oh I dont' know what to say to this. I honestly don't know what to say.... *hugs*

Hopelessly in love

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...
4 posted 2002-03-24 02:39 PM


jess, wow, i feel ur pain gurl, this expressed ur feelings well. i dont know the story behind this yet but i have a feeling u'll tell me when u want 2. lylan~

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

Dunphy
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since 2002-03-14
Posts 82
Massachusetts USA
5 posted 2002-03-25 10:05 AM


iss alwaz good to keep yo expretionz
when you be feelin down you know wuss tha bess meditation keep it alive go fo tha dive
you know it will arrive. juss keep it open you be in motion until tha day it will be poseted. well youk now what i'm tryin to say when tha day you be unda tha rain juss keep up you got tha luck. well i gotta go now i like that writtin of yoz keep it up i'm tellin ya you be doin a good deed. keep'em postin.

               love kevin reid
              aka dunphy
             18 m massachusetts

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
6 posted 2002-03-25 04:06 PM


Great write.
xShUgArHiGhx
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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
7 posted 2002-03-27 06:15 PM


Im sorry that this is happening in your life...::hugs:: stay strong

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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