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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2002-03-21 10:45 PM

[A]moment in time lasting so long
[L]oving each second i can sing to my own song
[L]ost amidst trying to be strong

[I]n the end i just try to hang on

[W]ondering what next will make me break
[A]waiting the signs predicting my fate
[N]ever knowing which road to take
[T]orchured every moment that i spend awake

[T]oo little to late i tried to be re-esembled
[O]nly to find the treatment makes me tremble

[D]ont know what to think or what my thoughts resemble
[O]nly lost in my body, my holy temple

[I] know tomorrow will come and i will awake
[S]till feeling as though my mind is fake

[S]omehow i hold on very tight
[L]ifting my emotions with all my might
[E]very thought confused not knowing wrong from right
[E]ven my goals are out of sight
[P]lease god i pray, just let me sleep through the night..

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-03-21 10:48 PM

Oh God, I know the feeling all to well....

But judging from my experience...and this great poem! Insomnia makes awesome poetry!!!!

Great Job!

~Lisa

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

2 posted 2002-03-22 12:57 PM

This is such a cool poem! I hope you finally got to sleep through the night!

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2002-03-27 01:27 AM

Really awsome piece I can relate to it perfectly. Keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more.
Lauren

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

4 posted 2002-03-27 12:22 PM

I have to admit, usually I don't like poems that that spell things out like that. It seems boring, but this was AWESOME! I forgot that you were spelling something and just read it, and I really liked it. Good thing I don't follow my first impression...
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2002-03-27 04:47 PM

Well im glad you enjoyed it

Thanks everyone for taking the time to read it!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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