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LCBS
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0 posted 2002-03-21 08:52 PM


High school hallways
depressing always
Rumors, gossip, funny looks
Fights, left & right hooks
Homework? Please, I cant relax
Is that a knife? Goes in my back
"Friends" none of those here
"stress" just a bit severe
HAHAHA....I'm way to tired
A clear mind, much desired
Laughing still yet for no reason
Teachers prosecution! High Treason
When is the last time I slept
on off between times I've wept
Oh dear lord my visions blurring
Oh well, now my speech is slurring
HIGH SCHOOL HALLWAYS
Exhausting always

I know I have nothing to complain about....but JEEZZZ I HATE high school....with a passion

[This message has been edited by LCBS (03-23-2002 06:21 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-21 10:28 PM


Omg i hate it w/a passion 2!! All of this is so true..i cant wait to get out!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2002-03-22 06:02 PM


High school.  Yuck.  I really like how all this is written, cool poem!

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

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3 posted 2002-03-23 12:46 PM


I wasn't too happy before I graduated myself. Hang in there guys!

sky

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4 posted 2002-03-23 01:34 PM


i like this! and what you said is so very true, good job!

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the wonderful land of oz
5 posted 2002-03-24 02:02 AM


::laughs::

'Is that a knife? Goes in my back.'

pure genius.

i LOVE that line.

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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6 posted 2002-03-24 02:53 AM


Do you have those groups of people who stand in the middle of the hallway so that no one can get by? Geeze I hate those people! Don't know what to say to this Lisa. You express yourself very well in your poetry; I dont' blame you for hating your school, what with the time you have to get up at *shudders*  

Hopelessly in love

Starr
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7 posted 2002-03-24 04:51 AM


LoL... Nice post..hehe
Didn't go highschool, school system different here... However, I passed through my school with a breeze LoL.. for some reason even though I never was in my classes I seem to be on top and to be 2 years ahead at Uni is great for me..I'm majoring in Vet Med there.
And I don't have to go everyday cause I'm ahead of my class.. oh well...
I'm the lucky one here

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

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8 posted 2002-03-25 04:29 PM


The hallways at my school are like giant (am I allowed to say orgies?) let's go with MOBS for right now... It's rather difficult to walk down the hall...

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

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