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I've Got Your Back
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I've Got Your Back |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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You cried out to me in pain last night, Cried out to me in tears. I wanted to take your hurt away, Wanted to take away your fears. Life isn't always fair to us, But sometimes we find that friend. Wo will love us no matter what we say, Will be with us until the end. I promise I won't turn away from you, I promise I'll be there. You can cry and swear all you want, And I promise I'll still care. So we have our differences, That won't make our friendship lack. I'll be there for you through thick and thin, I promise: I've got your back. To a couple very special people who were hurting last night. |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Wow, rght now Im wishing I had a friend like you....Im going through some hard stuff with my friend...And you just made me very envious Great Write ~Lisa |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Lisa, you want a friend like me, I'll be your friend. *grins* I am a rabid horse. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
she is a great friend lisa *applauds rhonda* through thick and thin chic! *hugs rhonda* i am me don't tell me different!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was so sweet..aww rhonda your such a good friend!! Great job on this  iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 ~ Titus "My body is merely the canvas of my soul." |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
*huggles* Huggles :) |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
it made me smile. ::smiles:: /jen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
Sweet!!!!!! Friends are so important.. They are lucky to have someone who cares for them as much as you do!!!! Good work here Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This was very good. This is how I feel for my closest friends, good job describing it. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hey, Rhonnie! Whoever this poem was written for---I can tell they'd feeling really good if they read this. *smiles* It's nice knowing someone has you as their guardian! Lol Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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Impulse Pro Junior Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 25Mass,USA |
That was the best poem keep it up Justin¥¿¥ |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Geez... very beautiful. Wonderufl poem. I feel the same way for my friends... kinda funny how most of them don't feel the same way for me...  (stupid masks...)Actually, I shouldn't say that. Anyway, awesome poem. Hmm... now all of a sudden I'm in a blue mood... I havn't been depressed in four days. Bite me! *bites herself* It's not your fault... I'm just writing so I know I'm still thinking logically enough. I just get set off by the stupidest things. Ok, NOW, I need to SHUT UP, and remind you again how much I enjoyed your poem, and leave. Bye! Kielo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Rhonda- What a wonderful expression of friendship. You're a terrific person, and your friends are fortunate to have you. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-18-2002 04:49 AM).] |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I loved this.....it's how I feel about my friends.  ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
yea she is one awesome friend!! *hugs rhonda so she can't breathe* i am me don't tell me different!! |
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