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aaron woodside
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0 posted 2002-03-21 12:21 PM



Fickle Fickle Fate
with everything laid out in time
your predictable monotony
which I do hate
leaves no room for debate
were I so inclined.

Ever get the feeling that even though everything is always changing, everything ultimatly stays the same.And theres nothing you can do to change it even if you wanted to.My two cents lately.

ex animo,
Aaron

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

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cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
1 posted 2002-03-21 12:27 PM


oh i missed your work! im glad youve started posting them back up again ...i can reate to you somewhat...things change, but the rules and game stays the same. *sighs* i liked this very carefully worded piece very much..thanks for sharing!

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IM ENGAGED!!!!!
2 posted 2002-03-22 11:38 AM


hey brat!
i tried to email you but i dont think you got it..hmmm..
so anyways
what goin on? this piece is a little different from most of your others..
email me and tell me whats up
oh btw
TODAY IS MY 8th MONTH ANNIVERSARY with Josh!!!
yay!!!
luv ya
-Amee

Tis better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all...

Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2002-04-01 04:03 PM


*smiles* Glad I'm not the only one who feels that way!!! Damn the fickle finger of fate anyways, Loved it

Kristen

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
4 posted 2002-04-03 01:39 AM


Trust me hun i've gotten that feeling a lot!!! Fate is fickled indeed...short and sweet poem! Liked it a lot!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

aaron woodside
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5 posted 2002-04-03 02:41 AM


Thnx for the replys everyone.  Been a little busy as of late with school and relationships and all and I havn't had much time to write or respond.  Hey Amee I got your email but just been busy I'll try to write ya in the next few days hun.  

ex animo,
Aaron

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

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