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corey14 Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 89Boston, Mass, U.S.A. |
i am loving you all the time not knowing how you feel for me just wanting to be with you all the time thinking about you the sweet sound of your voice. the fun of being with you loving you all i want is you not knowing if i will get it the love that you have life is unfair not giving, so harsh and yet i feel like you tear my hart in two unfair never what i want can we just start new but you must taunt taunt me with you love . but still loving you forever and always |
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Android 18 Member
since 2002-02-20
Posts 61Austrailia (My DreamLand) |
I really liked it! :thunmbsup: I'm going through the situation your portraying in your poem. ~*~Serena~*~ "I just want revenge. Is that so wrong?" |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is really sweet corey..maybe you should just up and ask her out or something? go for it- youve only got one life...might as well make the best of it  My england is goodly- are you strudable? |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
Yes, I think it's sweet.. Tell her, keeping it in all the time doesn't do much good for yourself.I can assure you of that (from my own experience). Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job on this, I really liked how it started out  "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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