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Teen Poetry #5

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fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2002-03-20 12:39 PM

now you see me, now you don't
in my life there are times
when i feel like maybe tomorrow you won't.
hiding from love
yet embracing pain
same endless cycle
just a different day.
a dangerous storm of emotions
rampaging through my soul
these are the only signs of my visibility
that i can't control.

-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

1 posted 2002-03-20 12:52 PM

Wow... very raw emotion. You put it into words well. lol... I like your critique message... Anyway, awesome poem. Thank you.

Never argue with a fool. He may be doing the same thing.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2002-03-20 12:54 PM

"a dangerous storm of emotions
rampaging through my soul"

that hit me hard....i liked this poem so much...thanks for sharing bergandy!

My england is goodly- are you strudable?

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-04-18 03:11 AM

fearing-laughter-
You've done a great job of expressing this
storm of emotions. Very well done!
Hugs,
~Vicky

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-04-18 01:37 PM

Awesome!! Absolutely awesome!! This one really hit home. Short and sweet and had such an impact on me. Thanks for sharing this!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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