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Jess_24
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0 posted 2002-03-19 06:02 PM


Why can't you be a man?
Why do you do this to my heart?
What makes you think you can play with my soul?
Who do you think you are?
Why can't you be a man?
I fell so hard for you.
Why did you have to pretend?
Why can't you of been a man?
I guess it wasn't ment to be.
If felt like love but that was your plan.
Why can't you be a man?
It hurt so bad when you made me cry.
when you told me it was all a lie.
You didn't care or shed a tear.
Why can't you be man?

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1 posted 2002-03-19 06:08 PM


been there done that girly ya gotta try to get over it.

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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2 posted 2002-03-19 06:11 PM


He can't be a man cause he isn't one! He's... uh, well I can't say that in here. But obviously he's not for you. *hugs* email me if you ever want someone to vent to.

I am a rabid horse.

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3 posted 2002-03-19 06:57 PM


yup ive been through the same thing...some boys never become men..ugh! i understand how you feel hun....Nice poem!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

LCBS
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4 posted 2002-03-19 08:20 PM


Been there, done that....

This was very well written, and Im sure a lot of us can relate to us, at least those of us that are girls...

Great Write

~Lisa


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