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0 posted 2002-03-19 01:59 PM


why must my heart suffer?
either you love me or not.
don't tell me one day you love me,
then next you don't need me.
why must my heart suffer?

why must my heart suffer?
i cry tears of pain because,
becaus i am confused
why must my heart suffer?

why must my heart suffer?
why i ask WHY???
do you like seeing me in pain?
do you like seeing me cry?
all i ask is why must my heart suffer?
why must my heart suffer?

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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1 posted 2002-03-19 03:47 PM


hey good job, i liked the repetition
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2 posted 2002-03-19 04:34 PM


*hugs Robin so hard she can't breathe again* Oh Robin... Sweetie... I don't know the answers to your questions... I wish I did... I wish I could take it all away. But I can't; all I can do is be there for you when you need me... *hugs again*

I am a rabid horse.

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3 posted 2002-03-19 06:02 PM


tankies every1!!

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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4 posted 2002-03-19 06:52 PM


Ugh confusion is definately no fun...hope you get things cleared up!!! Good work

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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5 posted 2002-03-30 01:53 AM


this poem is for someone that is dear to my heart but does not love me like i love him.

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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