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Marshalzu
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0 posted 2002-03-19 09:05 AM


And now for something completly different:

Tea with a crocodile.

I sat a while with a Crocodile, while we took some tea,
The Crocodile had swam a mile, chasing after me,
His great big smile needed a file, though I doubt he would agree,
For the crocodile, he needs his smile, if he wants to try eat me,
So as I try to rile this Crocodile, as I sit up on this tree,
This crocodile I find has guile, and I have no time to flee
Though the Crocodile had swam a mile, chasing after me,  
He had used his smile to make a file, and he cut down my safe tree
Now it was in the style to wear Crocodile, but now he laughs in glee
For the crocodile can wear his smile and now he can wear me


So there we go another crocodile related poem for my crocodile series, I hope you all enjoy

Andrew


"I have no strength or the decency in me to be a hero" - Biffy Clyro

[This message has been edited by Marshalzu (03-19-2002 09:06 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-19 12:58 PM


to cute zu to cute lol!

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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2 posted 2002-03-19 02:03 PM


Damn, there goes Zu. *grins* The second time I managed to get through this, I managed to do so without laughing, and I must say I enjoyed the read! Gotta love ya!

I am a rabid horse.

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3 posted 2002-03-19 02:18 PM




Zu, I love it!

I wish I had some deep response for you.... because I know you and I enjoy those, but *waves hands* I don't have one! I merely loved the read, it was a spendidly done humorous poem - which is an extremely hard one to do. The situation and chain of events were rather commical Spendid job mate.

~ Titus

My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity.

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4 posted 2002-03-19 08:18 PM


crocs are cool.

verrrrrry interesting.

see you in a while,
crocodile.

/gwen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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5 posted 2002-03-19 08:25 PM


HAHAHAHA....This was great...

I was almost eaten by an alligator...it was scary....

But back to the poem...GREAT WRITE....


~Lisa

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6 posted 2002-03-19 09:14 PM


lol, very cute Zu! How becoming of you. ~_^
It reminds me a lot of those poems that I used to read (or get my mom to read to me...) as a kid. It's cute all over! ^__^ Thanks for the read!


Leah

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7 posted 2002-03-20 10:46 PM


AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!....thats not fair! how come he got to eat you instead?...reminds me of 'jeepers creepers' *shudders* but we wont go there..
nice write andy... keep the witty ones coming!

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8 posted 2002-03-21 08:53 AM


The first thing I must say the name got me in here LOL.. It's really nice... Nice hilarious though..hehe.. good one

Thx for making start my day with a smile on my face.

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

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9 posted 2002-03-24 06:46 PM


Thank you for repling your huggles are in the post


Andrew: Huggle Administrator

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