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Lennon2002
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0 posted 2002-01-31 09:02 PM



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LoneWolf
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1 posted 2002-02-01 12:39 PM


this was awesome, i like it a lot, i could totallly relate. good job

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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2 posted 2002-02-01 02:55 PM


Nicely done Thanks for sharing!

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Barelybreathing
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3 posted 2002-02-02 08:48 PM


Very nicely written..thanks for sharing

'The greatest thing in the world is to know how to be one's own.'
~Montaigne~


HopelessRomanticGuy
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4 posted 2002-02-02 09:21 PM


this poem is powerful, i can REALLY relate...  Thanks for showing me how it's done.

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here?  Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

never_a_princess
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5 posted 2002-02-08 05:31 PM


omgosh..i can SO relate *muffled laughter* snifters. this is a great umm..tri-quel? to your poem, bucko! So..so, sew..so..emotional, but no, that's not the word I'm looking for. so, yeah. but! I think you know she loves you..Would you constantly decide to remain 'with her' if you didn't think so? *note the rhetoricality of the question?* :P Nice write.

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6 posted 2002-03-17 02:35 PM



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