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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-03-17 04:53 AM

Stop this room from spinning
Open up my eyes
My mind is reeling
Into blissful oblivion
Hold me
Comfort me
As I would do onto you
My sweet child
Pay no mind
To my endless tangents
Of passion and pain
And raging fires
Echoing out your name
Hold me
Be with me
Please don't let go of my hand
I need you
I love you
As any other dear friend
Would bestow upon your gentle brow
Warm my cold
Tired heart
Keep me from falling from this chair
Come over here
Please, whisper softly to me
That we will
Always be the bestest of Friends
Never letting go
Holding on tight
And not once
Allowing each other
To sucumb to the shadows
That prey upon innocence
In the darkest,lonely hours of the night...

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2002-03-17 05:37 AM

good poem i liked it a lot

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

2 posted 2002-03-17 01:41 PM

This was beautiful Kris (and I wasnt 1st to respond!)

I think we all want someone to hold us, to comfort us. And I pray that one day we are lucky enough to find that.

Great Write

Lisa

[This message has been edited by LCBS (03-17-2002 05:50 PM).]

ShortSexyAngelOnEarth
Junior Member

since 2001-12-24

Posts 36
im a louisiana cajun princess! lol

3 posted 2002-03-17 03:11 PM

hey, that was pretty! i liked it! good job!

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

4 posted 2002-03-17 09:14 PM

"To sucumb to the shadows
That prey upon innocence
In the darkest,lonely hours of the night..."

By far some of your best lines. I may have a thing for your work, but this one reaches me deeper. You know why, my friend. The longing, the passion, your raw emotions, I can comphrehend them.... which shows a well done poem. Splendid my friend. Splendid.

~ Titus

My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity.

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-17-2002 09:24 PM).]

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