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laconic
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since 2002-02-17
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-03-16 07:50 PM



tonite i surmise to say
that life aint full of lies
through the down times, a bright light shines
at the most unlikely of times
this pattern it seems
confuses and deems
itself the uncertainty of life
to swing and to strike
or see what a home run is like
is all mystery
trapped in the depths of a life so uncertain.
But now i know for fact
that life is like that
so in the good times my gaurd'll stay
and in the hard times i'll smile my troubles away.

© Copyright 2002 Luke Zhang - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-17 05:58 AM


good one luke very good!

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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2 posted 2002-04-05 12:12 PM



Iaconic-
I really enjoyed reading this one.
Well done!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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