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LCBS
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0 posted 2002-03-15 11:40 PM


Today I felt the worst pain that my heart has ever known
Today it did not matter all the "love" for me you've shown
Today you stabbed me in the back, made my soul bleed out
Today you killed a friendship, blocking out my silent shouts
Today when my back was turned, and my mind was elsewhere
Today you crept behind me, I did not know that you were there
Today you jabbed the knife right through my very back
Today you hit my heart hard, now you own everything I lack

Tomorrow maybe I will recover
Tomorrow maybe You will see
Tomorrow I will pull the knife out
Tomorrow you will hurt, not me


~Lisa

© Copyright 2002 Lisa Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Lennon2002
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1 posted 2002-03-15 11:44 PM


Nice

I'm ready for death because I don't believe in it- John Lennon

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
2 posted 2002-03-16 01:24 AM


::hugs::...sounds like a very rough day..dont worry girl, you'll get through this..keep ur chin up

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
3 posted 2002-03-16 03:35 AM


YOU GO LISA!!!

an awesome write lisa, sounds like no one should be messing with you. its awful knowing that your close friend backstabbed you, but its great knowing that youre not letting it pull you down. go for it girly, if need be deal out what they deserve for hurting you like that. (not that it has to be physical violence in anyway )
loved the read-angry as hell

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

anonymousfemale
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Limbo
4 posted 2002-03-16 09:26 AM


People suck, aye? Sorry to read you had such a crappy day. If anything now you know what this person is capable of. I recommend Kero and a match with a combination of her and a house.
Good imagery with the knife and great expression of your feelings.

Thanks for the read. Hope things improve for you.

~AF~

"Sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a little crazy." - Susanna Kaysen

TigerZ
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5 posted 2002-03-16 11:43 AM


I dont know what to say....other than make her see how much it hurts and great write!

I hope things get better

A life without loveā€¦is no life at all.

LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
6 posted 2002-03-16 12:27 PM


Box of matches it is...

(strikes first match, it goes out....)

(Does the same with three others....)

DAMNIT!!!!
~Lisa

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