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crazymin83
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0 posted 2002-03-15 09:09 PM


Where are you?
I wonder that every night I miss you.

Ever since December 23,1999 I’ve missed you
You were yellow and skinny
Your cancer was killing you
But I loved you

When I’d come in your room
You’d be sleeping
I’d wonder what were you dreaming of? Dying?
I wanted you to come home

When you woke up
You didn’t say much except give alittle smirk
We’d talk I’d make you laugh you said that was a gift
I was always good at that

Your life ended earlier than you thought did
You never got to see Christmas
You never got to bring in the New Year with us
But some how you did all that.

Everyone has moved on without you
I’ve learned how to walk more
And take life more serious then us to
Thank you dad  for 16 years of your life with me

Your smile would bring me to a higher level
Your laughter would make me a better person
Your hugs, kisses and everything I’ll always love
Now I’ll graduate knowing you won’t get lost to my school

But no matter where I go in life
I’ll be carrying you in my heart
Your charm
I’ll always love you dad
Minna
March 15, 2002

"If you can dream it, then you can believe in your dreams. Crazy D"

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LCBS
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Posts 532
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1 posted 2002-03-15 09:57 PM


This was really good, because I believe that once someone passes away they see everythign we do, I think that your father is smiling down at you, looking at you with the most pride a father can have.  Great Write..

~Lisa

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2 posted 2002-03-16 05:12 AM


This is beautiful and your father would be proud, he would have been looking down at you with every word of this you wrote. He would look down on you and guide you through life,
               God Bless you, Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

Lennon2002
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since 2002-01-10
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The wV
3 posted 2002-03-16 01:14 PM


If you feel him, you know he's still with you.

I'm ready for death because I don't believe in it- John Lennon

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
4 posted 2002-03-16 03:26 PM


Aw. I know what it's like to loose someone.
Best wishes. Great write.

crazymin83
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5 posted 2002-03-16 05:42 PM


Hey everyone, thanks for your reply's.

"If you can dream it, then you can believe in your dreams. Crazy D"

quietlydying
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6 posted 2002-03-17 08:06 PM


ah, much along the lines of an unsent letter.

i love unsent letters.

/gwen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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