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SlowDrag
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since 2002-01-10
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Tx...need i say more

0 posted 2002-03-15 04:12 PM


My life
is falling in line
no time to waste
so busy wasting time.

every time
i turn around
i see my past,
chasing me down.

Chorus:
I run to you
you run away
i can't escape yesterday.
i hold you close
You push me away.
you push me back to yesterday

I run away, run away
from the pain.
no matter what i say
it's always the same.

I tried so hard to
haven't tried at all.
I set myself up
just so i can fall.

Chorus.

Bridge:
Yesterday, i knew i'd fall.
Yesterday, I knew, i knew it all.
yesterday, I knew, I knew i would fall.

Chorus.

"Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..."

© Copyright 2002 Eric - All Rights Reserved
LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
1 posted 2002-03-15 04:18 PM


This is one of the first songs posted here, that I actually could hear in my head.  It was excellent, and I hope you can get back up when you fall...

Lisa

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2 posted 2002-03-15 05:26 PM


I really agree with yopu lIsa, this is one of those written songs you can just hear in your head, and I think it sounds great!!

~*~Serena~*~

SlowDrag
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Tx...need i say more
3 posted 2002-03-15 06:14 PM


thanks for your comments...i really want to know waht you think about this song, so keep them coming haha.

i wrote this (just fyi) not as a personal thing, but just kinda my description of life in general, or at least certain aspects of it. like how we make choices taht we know are wrong and we know will stick to us, but we do it anyway, then in the future when we want everything to be normal again, our choices haunt us.
and also about how everyone is looking for change, to move or start over or something, but when it finally happens, we realize taht the atmosphere is different, but it's all still the same as before. hah anyhow, thanks for the comments

"Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..."

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4 posted 2002-03-16 01:13 AM


This was really really good!! Unfortunately life doesnt stop when we have a hard day to let us recoupe...but what r u gonna do ya kno? Ya jus gotta go on but its a great topic to put into a song like u've done!! GREAT JOB!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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