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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-03-15 06:41 AM



How do you forgive someone,
Who’s hurt you more than one time?
Once, twice, three strikes,
You’re out.
Well let me tell you now,
That was your third strike,
And I’m outta here.

What do you say to that person,
If they try to apologize?
Do you want forgiveness
From me?
Well not this time buddy,
I can’t forget what you did,
Therefore I can’t forgive.

You’re on your own now,
Don’t ask me for anything else.
Apologies from you,
Mean nothing to me.
They’re worthless and fake,
Just as you are….

Such a fool to believe,
That I could ever love you.
You’re foul and loathed,
Among me and my friends.
How could you do this?
How could you cause me so much pain?
Me and you are over, for good and forever.

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

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1 posted 2002-03-15 11:44 AM


Some say that friends dont stab you in the back, but instead in the front. I dont believe friends should stab you at all..especially not three times!! Then theres a quote that says...if a friend betrays you once, its their fault, but if they betray you twice, its yours. So I guess if you want to keep this person as your friend..show them that your not 2 be played around with and if they were to do it again it would be your own fault for putting up with it...No one deserves being treated badly..i hope things work out good for you

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Lisa_bebe15
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2 posted 2002-03-15 12:58 PM


I wrote one like this awhile back..I know how it feels..my x-b/f and I were like that..i took him back FOUR times before I learned its not worth it..I cannot even stand to see his face anymore...the hurt is still there..the pain is still there..but I am moving on!  I am...I have put myself through so much pain for him..and now its over..I quit..I give up..So I can So relate to this poem..I was his angel..but now I have flown away from him..Nice write!
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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2002-03-15 03:59 PM


thanks 4 the replies....i'm hurting so much i could kill something....

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

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4 posted 2002-03-15 04:56 PM


Wow.Powerful words here. Powerful emotions. I've been there unfortunately, and I can't tell you how to deal, cause everyone's different. That and I delt with it rather violently. But if you're hurting so much you want to kill something go play a video game. I'm dead serious. Those are excellent stress relievers for me... and it's not real. Take time for yourself. If you ever need to talk or vent, email me
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I am a rabid horse.

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