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Isabel Galaxia
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0 posted 2002-03-14 09:34 PM


Craig, I wanted to appologize in person, but I can't wait that long.  I'm a little on the less creative side, so I had to use a little help from our buddy(lol)     Everyone else...just play along


I've got it all
For you I would crawl, away from the world
And I'd come back again.
You feel in within
The fear's back again-
Leaving your heart on the line to dry
     I'm a hopeless screwed up girl
It's a shame I cry so darn much
You know I can't always believe
      All the compliments you give
There's a moment for us this time,
When I promise to stay by your side
Keep your faith in us
You know that I, you know I will stay by your side.

I smile today
But it won't take away
Won't change the pain we've both caused before
Stupid and wrong-
Couldn't I have known
You'd get hurt when I hurt myself
     I'm your hopeless screwed up girl
It's a shame I cry so darn much
You know I can't always believe
      All the compliments you give
There's a moment here this time,
When I promise to stay by your side
Keep your faith in us
You know that I,
               You know I'll love your for all time


Forgive my difficulty, forgive my stubbornness, forgive my paranoia, forgive my need to bye reassured, forgive my moodiness, forgive my irritability, forgive me for all the wrongs I've done.  The world should know I love you.
Gracias.


[This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (03-14-2002 09:56 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-14 09:57 PM


good poem but i had to edit some of the words you had in it remeber this is a family site tks for the read very well written

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

vlraynes
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2 posted 2002-04-05 12:07 PM



Isabel-
Wonderful, heartfelt apology.
Hugs,
~Vicky


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3 posted 2002-04-06 02:30 AM


Aww, lovely.

Very nicely done.

Loved the sudden rush of words at the end, in particular.

~ Titus

"Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter"

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