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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2002-03-14 06:01 PM


Sitting
Shocked amongst the shattered
Pieces of my heart
What was I thinking
When I began
To shred my soul into pieces
Time lost
Not quite sure
Of the time
When I began to tread
Within my mind
Dark and cold
I sit alone
Amongst the tiny pieces
Of what used to be my soul
Lost
Dazed
Confused
Constantly kissing
The potent poisionous feeling
Of self-inflicted disappointment...

© Copyright 2002 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Kielo
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1 posted 2002-03-14 06:11 PM


Wow. You wrote this beautifully. I don't really know what to say, except that it was well-expressed, and I guess it hit home...
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2 posted 2002-03-14 06:43 PM


Kristen....

~ Titus

In My Mind's Eye, In My Mind's Eye...

LCBS
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3 posted 2002-03-14 09:24 PM


Hey Kris,

As with you other poems, I can relate to this really really well, it hits hard!  

Great Write

Lisa

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4 posted 2002-03-15 11:42 AM


WHoa...strong piece!! I know exactly how you feel ::hugs::

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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